Edited by leave_nothing, 07 November 2011 - 12:05 AM.
College Essay.
Started by leave_nothing, Oct 01 2011 03:21 AM
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Posted 01 October 2011 - 03:21 AM
Looking for a few opinions before I turn the final copy over to my teachers for their own assessments. I know it is rather lengthy but I can assure you it is one of the better college essays you will read. Above that I cannot express the gratitude I would have w/ you for your feedback. Without keeping you any longer, let's get this started...
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Posted 01 October 2011 - 03:55 AM
A bit too tired to read the rest, but I feel like your intro paragraph isn't very clear. It feels like it's running in circles or something. The flow seems rather weird too.
Though as I have said, I'm tired. So it might just be that.
What's the prompt for this essay, and what class is this for?
Though as I have said, I'm tired. So it might just be that.
What's the prompt for this essay, and what class is this for?
Edited by Mimi, 01 October 2011 - 03:55 AM.
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Posted 01 October 2011 - 04:04 AM
Just noticed plenty of grammatical errors >_______<
Oh and it's for ap-lit. The topic is pretty open-ended as the teacher <3's most of us. Must say it would be nice to have a swanky essay go along w/ the one part of the act I railed.
Oh and it's for ap-lit. The topic is pretty open-ended as the teacher <3's most of us. Must say it would be nice to have a swanky essay go along w/ the one part of the act I railed.
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