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#1 Komodin

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 10:18 PM

Greetings, reader. I would like to welcome you to Komodin's Stories. This is the thread where you can read (and provide feedback to) various stories written by yours truly, such as:For starters, you're probably wondering, "'The Blue Blur of Termina'? What in the hell is that, bro?" Well, allow me to provide a simple summary. Basically, it's a Sonic the Hedgehog / The Legend of Zelda crossover fanfiction, by yours truly. Based on the events of the game The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask along with some story elements from Sonic Unleashed, the story chronicles Sonic the Hedgehog and Tatl Beryllia's journey through the four corners of Termina to seek the help necessary to stop the catastrophic descent of the rogue moon before it annihilates the world.

If you like to read the full story, as released so far, here's a link, courtesy of me. For those of you who are on the fence on this, since I'm a nice guy, here's part of the first chapter.

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Alrighty, so, if you have any questions, advice or concerns about any of my stories that you wish to bring up, feel free to post them. With me, constructive criticism is very much appreciated, so don't be afraid to fire away. Just refrain from insulting me, okay?.

So, do you wish to share your thoughts, friend?

Edited by Komodin, 05 November 2012 - 03:05 AM.


#2 Komodin

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 05:04 PM

Alrighty, here's a basic draft I made for Chapter 7. As I stated before, any constructive criticism is very much appreciated, so fire away!

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 02:03 AM

Alright, after mulling it over for the past couple days, I've decided to make this topic into a general thread where I can show off all of my works. For instance, let's start with Mischief Makers: A Cybot's Tale.

This one started as a self-imposed challenge. See, for those who don't know of the original game, Mischief Makers' story made about as much sense as a Dada art piece. Sure, the gameplay and everything was aces, but again, the game's story made absolutely no sense for the most part. Basically, I want to see if I could make the story more... sensical. You know, something that has a more logical flow to it. So, here's the main point of this story: to retell the story of Mischief Makers in a more straightforward narrative. Here's a courtesy link for those interested, but for those who are on the fence on this, here's the first chapter:

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Again, if you have any questions and constructive criticism, don't keep it a secret; fire away! It would be very much appreciated.

Also, can someone else please post something (that's on-topic)? I don't wan't to break any rules concerning multiple posting.

Edited by Komodin, 23 April 2012 - 04:44 AM.


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Posted 23 April 2012 - 05:25 AM

Again, if you have any questions and constructive criticism, don't keep it a secret; fire away! It would be very much appreciated.

Also, can someone else please post something (that's on-topic)? I don't wan't to break any rules concerning multiple posting.


Sure, I'll bite. But I have neither a question or constructive criticism to offer you, just a complement...or two. Posted Image

I love how descriptive your sentences are. I can envision everything you mention as a picture as I read along. And you don't use too many words, making your work very easy and enjoyable to read.

Your style reminds me of the way that I used to write back in the day when I wrote fanfictions...ah good times. That's probably why I like it so much. Anyway, keep up the good work! Look forward to seeing more from you!

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 05:15 PM

Sure, I'll bite. But I have neither a question or constructive criticism to offer you, just a complement...or two. Posted Image

I love how descriptive your sentences are. I can envision everything you mention as a picture as I read along. And you don't use too many words, making your work very easy and enjoyable to read.

Your style reminds me of the way that I used to write back in the day when I wrote fanfictions...ah good times. That's probably why I like it so much. Anyway, keep up the good work! Look forward to seeing more from you!


Gee, thanks, mon! Don't worry, there will be more stuff from me; in fact, providing that nothing major happens, Chapter Seven of The Blue Blur of Termina should be up in a few days.

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Posted 24 April 2012 - 02:13 AM

Gee, thanks, mon! Don't worry, there will be more stuff from me; in fact, providing that nothing major happens, Chapter Seven of The Blue Blur of Termina should be up in a few days.


Yay! Take your time in putting your work up here...I'm following this topic so I'll be notified when you post something again here. Oh, and you're welcome, by the way.

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 11:27 AM

Hey, guys, I'm almost done with Chapter 7 of The Blue Blur of Termina! Here's the first part of said chapter; if you want, tell me what you think of it!

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Posted 02 May 2012 - 04:34 AM

Hey, guys, I'm almost done with Chapter 7 of The Blue Blur of Termina! Here's the first part of said chapter; if you want, tell me what you think of it!


I'm sorry, I read this a few days ago and I forgot to get back to you about it. Once again I enjoyed what I read, as continue to envision everything that you described. Keep putting out those details! It really makes the reading come alive! Oh, and I got a good laugh out of this chapter too. Posted Image

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Posted 15 May 2012 - 02:10 PM

Hey, guys, Chapter 7 of The Blue Blur of Termina is now available to read! If you want, tell me what you think of it! Posted Image

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 03:31 AM

Hey, guys, Chapter 7 of The Blue Blur of Termina is now available to read! If you want, tell me what you think of it! Posted Image


I just finished reading the rest of it and I loved it! Props to you for making a game of hide-and-seek interesting with all the details! Also I loved the Sonic Colors' cutscene reference with Tatl shopping and getting a bite to eat...I saw what you did there! Posted Image

Oh, is it me or does Tatl need to be slapped?! I think she does...anyway, once again good job! Looking forward to next chapter, which would be Chapter 8, right?

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 06:41 PM

I just finished reading the rest of it and I loved it! Props to you for making a game of hide-and-seek interesting with all the details! Also I loved the Sonic Colors' cutscene reference with Tatl shopping and getting a bite to eat...I saw what you did there! Posted Image


Thanks for the review, mon! Yeah, I pretty much had to do it; the opportunity to make such a reference was far too golden to pass up, y'know!

Oh, is it me or does Tatl need to be slapped?! I think she does...


Oh, if you think she's bad now, just wait until the later chapters roll around. Just sayin'...

]anyway, once again good job! Looking forward to next chapter, which would be Chapter 8, right?


Correct, and it will be up in a couple days! Again, thanks for the little review; with me, feedback is very much appreciated!

Edited by Komodin, 16 May 2012 - 06:42 PM.


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Posted 17 May 2012 - 04:18 AM

Thanks for the review, mon! Yeah, I pretty much had to do it; the opportunity to make such a reference was far too golden to pass up, y'know!

You're welcome! Yeah, the Sonic Colors reference I thought was pretty clever Posted Image

Oh, if you think she's bad now, just wait until the later chapters roll around. Just sayin'...

Oh really?! Wow...I'm definitely gonna have to check that out!

Correct, and it will be up in a couple days! Again, thanks for the little review; with me, feedback is very much appreciated!

Cool, looking forward to it! And again, you're welcome! Posted Image

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Posted 21 May 2012 - 01:41 AM

Alright, guys, here's a snippet of Chapter 8 for The Blue Blur of Termina. If you want, tell me what you think of it.

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Posted 22 May 2012 - 03:08 AM

Alright, guys, here's a snippet of Chapter 8 for The Blue Blur of Termina. If you want, tell me what you think of it.


Another finely detailed chapter! It was a bit graphic to me, but I liked it still. I have yet to find anything to be critical about in your writing, so keep up the good work! Posted Image

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 07:10 PM

Hey, guys! Just to let you all know, Chapter 8 for The Blue Blur of Termina is now available to read! As always, if you want, tell me what you think of it!

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 03:55 AM

Hey, guys! Just to let you all know, Chapter 8 for The Blue Blur of Termina is now available to read! As always, if you want, tell me what you think of it!


Once again I love all the details! I can so see the colorful staircase with the way you described it...absolutely beautiful! Another thing I like is how spaced out your paragraphs are. You don't have a whole bunch of sentences in a single paragraph, making it very easy to read. Again, keep up the good work! Can't wait to find out what happens next! Posted Image

Oh, I just thought of something: where are Chapters 2 through 6? I've only seen Chapters 1, 7 and 8 on here...

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 04:13 AM

The exaggeration and detail of tearing that skulltulla to shreds... haven't we all felt that when that thing popped down the first time? xD

And holy shit, that about-face scene was plain fucking creepy. o_o;;; Can't take horror material well.

Masochist as I am on that part, can't wait for more. xD I love BBOT!

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 03:14 PM

Aw, thanks for the compliments, guys! It really does make me happy seeing you all enjoy my story so far! Posted Image

Oh, I just thought of something: where are Chapters 2 through 6? I've only seen Chapters 1, 7 and 8 on here...


Well, I wanted to post them here as well, but I'm afraid that they might make this page too long to read through, even if they were spoilered. However, you can read those chapters through this link here. Feel free to give me your thoughts on them!

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Posted 07 July 2012 - 04:39 AM

Aw, thanks for the compliments, guys! It really does make me happy seeing you all enjoy my story so far! Posted Image

Well, I wanted to post them here as well, but I'm afraid that they might make this page too long to read through, even if they were spoilered. However, you can read those chapters through this link here. Feel free to give me your thoughts on them!


*Sees my last post here was May 23rd...* Has it been that long since I replied to this topic?!

Anyway, thanks for giving me the link to the other chapters! After putting it off time and time again I finally sat down and read not only Chapters 2 through 6, which I never read, but also re-reading the chapters that you had up here before. So basically I read the whole story so far. Sorry it took me so long!

I have nothing new to say about your story, other than what I have been mentioning before. I'm getting a movie-like vibe to your story, as you describe everything so well, it's like I see a visual playing in my mind as I read along, if that makes any sense. I'm enjoying it very much! How is chapter 9 coming along? Looking forward to it as well as more chapters from you! Posted Image

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Posted 08 July 2012 - 01:05 PM

*Sees my last post here was May 23rd...* Has it been that long since I replied to this topic?!

Anyway, thanks for giving me the link to the other chapters! After putting it off time and time again I finally sat down and read not only Chapters 2 through 6, which I never read, but also re-reading the chapters that you had up here before. So basically I read the whole story so far. Sorry it took me so long!


Aw, that's okay. At least you're up to speed.

I have nothing new to say about your story, other than what I have been mentioning before. I'm getting a movie-like vibe to your story, as you describe everything so well, it's like I see a visual playing in my mind as I read along, if that makes any sense. I'm enjoying it very much! How is chapter 9 coming along? Looking forward to it as well as more chapters from you! Posted Image


Chapter 9 is coming along smoothly; barring some weird event, like my computer crapping out on me, it should be up in a few days. Once again, thank you for reading and giving me feedback on my story. This may sound a bit sappy, but... seeing others enjoy my stories make me happy. Posted Image





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