kirby1up
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from what I understand these "twisted" animatronics designs are meant to be something sorta along the lines of the nightmare animatronics for the 2nd fnaf book thats releasing next week. though I do agree that these designs are pretty underwelming compared to the games. (though I think with some adjustments to the design wolf o'donnell could be an interesting new animatronic to deal with in a future game) as for the green eyes my guess is we will start to get teasers for the next game after the second book is released.
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I managed to completely forget the musical ballots last year but I sure ain't missing them this year! Sonic Battle
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something is bugging me about the new amiibo why is it the botw and metroid amiibo are being sold at a 15.99
where as every other new amiibo (pikmin,mario,ssb4,fire emblem,splatoon2) is only being charged at 12.99
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yeah but in this case I got the prices from gamestop only.
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Oh, well then damn. Now I'm fearing TRUs prices. XD
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30 minutes till Bethesda's E3 Showcase hop on in for some music while we wait
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went to see wonder woman today and enjoyed it. now heres hoping justice league doesn't blow up for all the wrong reasons.
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hmm perhaps maybe the reason I can't come up with a single flowing story is because I have too many characters/character backgrounds/story arcs plus inconsistent story tones I keep running into.
perhaps I should try to find a way to filter it into 3 different stories that I can work on.
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wow if that vanilla list for mvc:infinite is true then that means that even that marvel:battle for earth had a better roster then it. (and that game was a rock paper scissors game with motion controls)
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well wave 9 of lego dimensions (and presumably the last wave) got revealed
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I honestly have no idea how to introduce my characters in a story...help
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What's the story about? Who are the characters?
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http://creativewriting.wikia.com/wiki/Introducing_a_Character
http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/write-better-3-ways-to-introduce-your-main-character
http://www.nownovel.com/blog/how-to-introduce-characters/
https://readtowritestories.com/2013/08/27/how-to-introduce-characters-to-each-other/
Plenty more than that with a simple search of "How to introduce characters" on Google.
Also, if you can find someone to critique your intro, that might go a long way.
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@Conquering Storm's Servant I've considered asking someone to critique some of my story stuff before I post it publicly. thing is I don't have anyone I can simply ask out of the blue.
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Yeah, that usually is the hardest part to do.
Best bet is to find someone who also writes in their spare time to see you work, but usually anyone can do if you trust them. Find someone interested in reading a physical copy of you work, have them make notes and then hand it back so you can improve.
Also, be sure you can tell when someone's being constructive in criticism or if they're just insulting you - those who are constructive might be harsh, but they'll use that harsh criticism to help you find other ways of achieving the same thing of whatever it is you're trying to get in your writing with as little bias as they can muster. Of course it's not a guarantee.
Do the sources I linked to you help tho?
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wipes dust off the injustice 2 topic* well we got our first gameplay look at red hood today. (also the fighter pack is set to release in june) and tomorrow a new multiverse event will show up with WW's new movie inspired gear
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Well after thinking which song should be added I have to say. The smash bros 64 version of Gourmet Race (I would say the kirby super star version but I think the smash bros version would fit better for a bumper)
